Constructive Criticism Pl0x

I drew my first Maple char today in pencil

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I like it, but it dosent look right to me and I can't place my finger on it. Can you guys help me improve by pointing out the problems? If there is something about it you like tell me also

Them boobs is lopsided. The Fin is also looking like it came from a cereal box.

Also, one of the feet looks like a flipper.

Them boobs is lopsided. The Fin is also looking like it came from a cereal box.

A...cereal box?...:f6:

I don't understand

A...cereal box?...:f6:

I don't understand

He means to make it more real looking .

Hmm...I guess shrink the body and enlarge the head to fit a Mapler's dimensions?

Hmm...I guess shrink the body and enlarge the head to fit a Mapler's dimensions?

That's exactly what i was thinking.

He means to make it more real looking .

Hmm...I guess shrink the body and enlarge the head to fit a Mapler's dimensions?

That all depends on what he is going for though. Perhaps he wants a Maple character to look more realistic. I think it looks good, but your sense of proportion could be improved. Also, try to keep your hand a bit more steady so that the physique will not seem lopsided.

A...cereal box?...:f6:

I don't understand

Make it bigger and more threatening.

The pants are lopsided too and the you only drew three fingers (four if you count the thumb).

Now that I think about it, the body is facing forward, but the feet are kind of turned sideways.

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