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Constructive Criticism Pl0x - JakeAndBake - 2008-12-06
I drew my first Maple char today in pencil
Spoiler
![[Image: 1stbasiler-1.jpg]](http://i342.photobucket.com/albums/o410/jrvillarreal25/1stbasiler-1.jpg)
I like it, but it dosent look right to me and I can't place my finger on it. Can you guys help me improve by pointing out the problems? If there is something about it you like tell me also
Constructive Criticism Pl0x - Cyadd - 2008-12-06
Them boobs is lopsided. The Fin is also looking like it came from a cereal box.
Constructive Criticism Pl0x - chrome - 2008-12-06
Also, one of the feet looks like a flipper.
Constructive Criticism Pl0x - JakeAndBake - 2008-12-06
Cyadd Wrote:Them boobs is lopsided. The Fin is also looking like it came from a cereal box.
A...cereal box?...:f6:
I don't understand
Constructive Criticism Pl0x - Corn - 2008-12-06
JakeAndBake Wrote:A...cereal box?...:f6:
I don't understand
He means to make it more real looking
.Hmm...I guess shrink the body and enlarge the head to fit a Mapler's dimensions?
Constructive Criticism Pl0x - Kirov - 2008-12-07
ClawofBeta Wrote:Hmm...I guess shrink the body and enlarge the head to fit a Mapler's dimensions?
That's exactly what i was thinking.
Constructive Criticism Pl0x - silverquiver - 2008-12-07
ClawofBeta Wrote:He means to make it more real looking
Hmm...I guess shrink the body and enlarge the head to fit a Mapler's dimensions?
That all depends on what he is going for though. Perhaps he wants a Maple character to look more realistic. I think it looks good, but your sense of proportion could be improved. Also, try to keep your hand a bit more steady so that the physique will not seem lopsided.
Constructive Criticism Pl0x - Blankout - 2008-12-07
JakeAndBake Wrote:A...cereal box?...:f6:
I don't understand
Make it bigger and more threatening.
Constructive Criticism Pl0x - Daimean - 2008-12-09
The pants are lopsided too and the you only drew three fingers (four if you count the thumb).
Constructive Criticism Pl0x - Corn - 2008-12-09
Now that I think about it, the body is facing forward, but the feet are kind of turned sideways.
:f6: