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Mugged By JezzaRules
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#3
2008-11-10, 05:37 PM
My suggestion? Try to convey your "punchline" without using so many words. You have a case of 'Buckley-itis' (See: CAD comics.) Comics are supposed to be a visual media, and not so much on words.

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As you can see, the last 3 panels are pretty pointless when the punchline was delivered in the 4th panel.
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Mugged By JezzaRules - by JezzaRules - 2008-11-10, 06:00 AM
Mugged By JezzaRules - by Kurtle - 2008-11-10, 04:54 PM
Mugged By JezzaRules - by Mark - 2008-11-10, 05:37 PM
Mugged By JezzaRules - by JezzaRules - 2008-11-10, 05:54 PM
Mugged By JezzaRules - by Mark - 2008-11-10, 06:04 PM
Mugged By JezzaRules - by Blankout - 2008-11-10, 06:06 PM
Mugged By JezzaRules - by JezzaRules - 2008-11-10, 06:11 PM
Mugged By JezzaRules - by cshaobu914802 - 2008-11-29, 10:03 AM

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