[Draft] Pets - All About Them

Answers in bold.
Anyways, here I go... back to editing.

You said this:

It's not false. Pets did not all come out at one time, one date. Different pets came out at different times, and I have recorded these when the pets have came out.

I'm just bashing you on your choice of words.
If you say you "have done research on these commands and stuff over the years," it gives the impression that you worked dilligently for years on the subject, which is false.
You just said you 'recorded' the pet commands, etc. when different pets came out, and that doesn't give the same feeling as 'over the years.' Rather, I get a mental picture of a person jotting down notes, simply '[recording]' something.
I know it sounds cool to you, but it really irritates me because it makes your work feel like it was worked on for a long time, but when in reality, you spent simply 'half an hour' on it.