2010-06-15, 08:09 PM
Pikamemnon Wrote:When u mentioned friday the 13th, I thought that u were making some kind of horror thing. Besides that I just think that it could use some more action.
like i said, its only the beginning three paragraphs to it. thanks to refinding this ive been working on something else, which is more an off-and-on project, but im going to at least work on it to prove i can still write sh'it other than poetry.
and about him being born on friday 13th, its more a setup for how his life is a bit unlucky.