2009-02-22, 06:26 AM
ah, thanks for reading! one of those 5-minute jobs actually: i didn't even think about the repeated "and." but actually you're right, it kinda does give it a rhythm. it does also mean that all the paragraphs begin with the same word - ah well!
i was actually parodying genesis 1 (biblical creation story), which records God as saying "And he saw that it [creation] was good." - if that explains the last bit. it does look a bit tacked on the end though. would you have cut it out entirely or put it in a new paragraph by itself?
animal teaching of humanity: nice way to put it. -mental image of a badger on a tree stump with badgers listening all around-
i was actually parodying genesis 1 (biblical creation story), which records God as saying "And he saw that it [creation] was good." - if that explains the last bit. it does look a bit tacked on the end though. would you have cut it out entirely or put it in a new paragraph by itself?
animal teaching of humanity: nice way to put it. -mental image of a badger on a tree stump with badgers listening all around-