2012-11-22, 02:07 AM
ShinkuDragon Wrote:her left shoulder seems wrong, like you didn't switch colors.
Oh shoot! you're right, lol! the colours are off now that I look at it
. It's weird I tried my hardest to edit myself and refine this time so I catch any mistakes, I don't like... but there's always that one time I forget! (I feel like I say this all the time haha, but im colourblind btw)ShinkuDragon Wrote:and i feel the legs are waay too long.
Yah they may seem like that, but it's actually pretty proportionate in check with her head, (average female head count is 7.5, where as 8 is "ideal") her head count is actually pretty close to right around 7 heads (to the heel). So basically she's actually shorter if we're talking proportion wise, in relations to her head.
but from a stylistic point, her torso is really diminished, which was intentional
![[Image: 14vocpd.jpg]](http://i45.tinypic.com/14vocpd.jpg)
ShinkuDragon Wrote:i got a weird feeling about the ears but i know that's where they're supposed to be.
I agree lol, I should change the tone more to her flesh! (I can kind of tell it's off)! im just lazy ;_;
ShinkuDragon Wrote:other than that, it looks as good as always love how "wing"-ey the wings look, even though they're not really defined, i still don't know how you do that.
thanks!
It take's a lot of layering! (mixing defined strokes with loose strokes!)

