2008-12-22, 07:40 PM
http://www.thestar.com/News/Canada/article/548936
cause back when I had to write fake newspapers in English class, the teacher took marks off me for making it sound like a story rather than news.
"At one point, he saw someone wearing red the colour of her jacket on the shore signalling for him. But he quickly realized it was a rescuer."
I had something just like that and the teacher took marks off me...
She said that if I can find a news that tells a story like what i was doing, she'll give me the marks.
Now i find something, but 5 years have passed >.>
cause back when I had to write fake newspapers in English class, the teacher took marks off me for making it sound like a story rather than news.
"At one point, he saw someone wearing red the colour of her jacket on the shore signalling for him. But he quickly realized it was a rescuer."
I had something just like that and the teacher took marks off me...
She said that if I can find a news that tells a story like what i was doing, she'll give me the marks.
Now i find something, but 5 years have passed >.>

