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is this what news should sound like? - Horusmaster - 2008-12-22

http://www.thestar.com/News/Canada/article/548936

cause back when I had to write fake newspapers in English class, the teacher took marks off me for making it sound like a story rather than news.

"At one point, he saw someone wearing red – the colour of her jacket – on the shore signalling for him. But he quickly realized it was a rescuer."

I had something just like that and the teacher took marks off me...

She said that if I can find a news that tells a story like what i was doing, she'll give me the marks.
Now i find something, but 5 years have passed >.>


is this what news should sound like? - PKProStudio - 2008-12-22

Well that's a little too late for you. Why the heck would you still remember that anyway. Tongue


is this what news should sound like? - Mashi - 2008-12-22

Its one of those things you just remember?


is this what news should sound like? - Lana♥ - 2008-12-22

interesting


is this what news should sound like? - Horusmaster - 2008-12-22

cause my marks could have been higher and my parents won't force me to study english all the time. I'm glad it's over now that I don't need to study english, but the horror of studying english still hunts me now and then.


is this what news should sound like? - PKProStudio - 2008-12-22

Horusmaster Wrote:cause my marks could have been higher and my parents won't force me to study english all the time. I'm glad it's over now that I don't need to study english, but the horror of studying english still hunts me now and then.

That's why you should study more English. Wink


is this what news should sound like? - WingZero - 2008-12-23

PKProStudio Wrote:That's why you should study more English. Wink

Horusmaster Wrote:maplestory did made my grade go down last year cause I was so into it. You're far from getting into the game though with only 10 hours/week.

Neither way it's good that you quit, cause I quitted too.

And it's pretty amazing that you quitted that easily.
Took me a long while to quit, and I gotta thank Nexon for pineappleing up the game or i'll never quit lol.

but anyways at least your mom doesn't complain about being on the computer for so long for doing hwk.

Sorry, I couldn't help it. Rolleyes


is this what news should sound like? - Kranzorbaken - 2008-12-23

WingZero Wrote:Sorry, I couldn't help it. Rolleyes

I'm sorry, but you missed him saying it didn't made his grades go down. It should be make, not made. Good going, you even fail at being a grammar Nazi. Also its either way not neither way. But yeah try to do a better job at being a plantain next time kk thnx.


is this what news should sound like? - WingZero - 2008-12-23

Kranzorbaken Wrote:I'm sorry, but you missed him saying it didn't made his grades go down. It should be make, not made. Good going, you even fail at being a grammar Nazi. Also its either way not neither way. But yeah try to do a better job at being a plantain next time kk thnx.
O_o''

I just used ctrl + c, from a previous post.... http://www.southperry.net/forums/showthread.php?t=7090
Also, I had no intention of being a being a grammar Nazi, maybe a different emote would have been better. Maybe this one? :f6:

This is the Funhouse, I'm just poking fun of something. kk thnx to you and be sure to chill out next time. Biggrin


is this what news should sound like? - Kranzorbaken - 2008-12-23

Sorry just hate any kind of grammr fixers
guess thats kinda hypocritical but meh


is this what news should sound like? - JoeTang - 2008-12-23

Since you don't seem to understand what context is, you deserve to have your parents force you to study more English.