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As Misery Call, Thus Answer (Regretfully So)
#1
A lonely cat sheds a tear for no one to understand.
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#2
Very good story Felix. I'm guessing we'll be seeing more since this is the prologue?
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#3
I like the imagery and can see the events vividly in my head. The coworker paragraph gives a bit more background to his misery but it feels out of place to me.

Ch 2: Loving the setting.

Ch 3: I'm surprised he actually planned a date.
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#4
A lonely human sheds a tear for everyone to scorn.
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#5
I shed a tear to try to make you listen.
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#6
You shed a tear to try to make me feel guilty.
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#7
Okay what.

Cats, waves, suicides, apathy and loneliness. I'm depressed now. Pleasantly depressed though. I blame you Kyle.
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#8
But no one will ever really care.
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