Dr. DeWolfe

Claws need work. Any improvements on this beast?

A (loose) tie would be cool. No pun intended, sorry.

Of course, a tie! Wait... do doctors wear ties?

The center of the arms look sorta.. thin, compared to the rest.

Of course, a tie! Wait... do doctors wear ties?

That or a stethoscope. Or both.

[COLOR="red"]No fingers, just claws?

No bottom portion of the mouth, just teeth hanging out?[/COLOR]

Very nice build up for the composition. Outcome is very nice.

The forearms seem disproportionately thin and physically bent, even for the style you're aiming for. Kinda makes for a "plucked chicken" look rather than a savage beast. Also those legs are throwing me off somehow, they still seem inconsistent with each other. I think it's the way the torn trousers are drawn that throws it off, as one trouser leg seems to actually be larger than the other (not just stretched), which seems unrealistic. This is just what I'm seeing though.

Of course, all of that could be put down to deformities as a result of mutation or whatever the backstory of this character/enemy is (assuming he has a backstory seeing as he has a specific name). Has potential as a concept so long as it doesn't turn into a classic Jekyll/Hyde sequence.

The story I had come up with this guy is some insane doctor trying to become a werewolf with the use of potions and was finally able to succeed, not to full power. I agree that the forearms are a bit too thin, I'll definitely give 'em more meat if he gets implemented into the game. Thank you for such an informative post, man. : D

Also, yes, claws only and visible bottom jaw.

Appreciate everyone's comments!

I want to play this flash game. Now.

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The story I had come up with this guy is some insane doctor trying to become a werewolf with the use of potions and was finally able to succeed, not to full power. I agree that the forearms are a bit too thin, I'll definitely give 'em more meat if he gets implemented into the game. Thank you for such an informative post, man. : D

Also, yes, claws only and visible bottom jaw.

Appreciate everyone's comments!

In the game, you should make it that you have to rip his claws off to use the doors of his lab, since he changed all the knobs to claw-holes that you have to place the claws into and then turn, like a regular key.[/COLOR]