2010-02-13, 02:56 PM
(This post was last modified: 2010-02-13, 03:02 PM by xLeviathan.)
Peer reviews that aren't required, lolwut? No, seriously, I have a college essay I NEED to get right because although my college GPA is like .60 above the average transfer into this university, my high school GPA is probably like .60 beneath the average. Even though they don't put much emphasis on high school records for transfer students, I'm not gonna bargain and slack on my essay.
So if anyone wants to review this for grammar and content, please do so. Anything regarding appropriateness, errors, mistakes, etc. is welcome.
Everything in here is true...I tried to be as honest as possible without too much cliche crap. Not sure how well I did that xd. I'm not trying to make up some weird humanitarian story that is full of lies that will impress anybody who reads it. I'm really interested in giving them a look into what I want to do with my life and I'd like to see if other people think I did that in a good way.
https://docs.google.com/Doc?docid=0AYGDs...NzQz&hl=en
EDIT: Can't quite decide if I'm done at the end. The ending seems cut-off, but I'm at the "desired limit" so I'd like to not add much more...
So if anyone wants to review this for grammar and content, please do so. Anything regarding appropriateness, errors, mistakes, etc. is welcome.
Everything in here is true...I tried to be as honest as possible without too much cliche crap. Not sure how well I did that xd. I'm not trying to make up some weird humanitarian story that is full of lies that will impress anybody who reads it. I'm really interested in giving them a look into what I want to do with my life and I'd like to see if other people think I did that in a good way.
https://docs.google.com/Doc?docid=0AYGDs...NzQz&hl=en
EDIT: Can't quite decide if I'm done at the end. The ending seems cut-off, but I'm at the "desired limit" so I'd like to not add much more...