Writing music (Anti-Necroposting addition!)

I wanted to reply to my old thread but the last one was more than three weeks ago.

I'm looking for feedback on my current project:

http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/listen/347528

You've already come a long way my friend.

But it's only my third project :X

But you've already come a long way. I always liked writing writing writing and then compare the s'hit I used to do back in 2004 and the s'hit I do now. It's a pretty overwhelming experience.

What I want to be able to do is stick as many themes as possible into my work coherently, the intro is basically the same two chords played over for 40 seconds in this (I'm not going to scrap it, but I feel like I need to move on quicker). Each time I make something it ends up being all adding/removing layers, which is fine but I want to extend my ability to multiple styles.

Also trying out slow atmospheric stuff... This is pretty simple but it's meant to put you to sleep anyway:

http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/listen/348168