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Jenna's Umbrella
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Man, it's been a while since I actually tried finishing something.

[Image: OC___Jenna__s_Umbrella_by_MariettaRC.png]

http://mariettarc.deviantart.com/art/OC-...-155131522
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#2
I really like the umbrella a-@ Though I may have made the tip a bit smaller, just seems like it would pull it together better. Overall use of shading is nice too.
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#3
Sn1perJohnE Wrote:I really like the umbrella a-@ Though I may have made the tip a bit smaller, just seems like it would pull it together better. Overall use of shading is nice too.

Oh, I should have explained that there's a reason behind the way the umbrella looks, it's involved in a story a friend of mine's working on. So the large, pointy tip and the large handle with random buttons were intended.

Thanks. c:
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#4
That's some nice shading you got going there. The colors are wonderful in the entire drawing.

The only problem I'm having with it is the face, it looks a bit to long and the eyes seem a bit too large or white, or too much white eye thing.

Still great stuff, keep on showing it off!
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#5
Loose Wrote:That's some nice shading you got going there. The colors are wonderful in the entire drawing.

The only problem I'm having with it is the face, it looks a bit to long and the eyes seem a bit too large or white, or too much white eye thing.

Still great stuff, keep on showing it off!

I thought the face was ok. It not like all faces are the exact same shape, so it kind of brings some realism to it. As for the eyes, it looks like she is looking up and to the left slightly, but her face isnt turned with her eyes.
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