iYourii 15x hero (Motivation)

Well this is where i've been working on lately...
I hope you enjoyed it I started making this at 143 and it never was my intension to make it a 15x hero vid

[video=youtube;9xc_DUKOG2s]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9xc_DUKOG2s[/video]

Hey Youri, long time no see, never imagined you'd become so pro, man.

Wow!
I like it! I wish somebody made something this good for corsairs!

Btw, what recorder/editor did you use?

What's your damage range with 1h and 2h swords?

Over-used some effects. Unless you wanted it to seem 'dramatic' like a movie or something, I supposed. If you were aiming for that, 8/10.

Over-used some effects. Unless you wanted it to seem 'dramatic' like a movie or something, I supposed. If you were aiming for that, 8/10.

That.

Oh, also, you tried too hard to make it motivational, that you threw away all shreds of originality.

1. Overused, overused music (so overused, I have to use the word twice!)
2. The overused effects hurt the eyes. They're cool for like...10 seconds, and then they get old. If you cant justify using them, dont use them.
3. Overused plot...that "I cant do it without friends" thing is starting to get old, especially when 7463124 videos have used it already.

A few things:

1. Videos that end up being motivational usually arent labeled as that by the author; they're deemed that by the audience that watches it.
2. Its good that you had a variety of scenes instead of just 5 minutes at skeles or whatnot
3. The whole pap friends thing was pretty well done (albeit overused-the theme-...you found a creative way to represent it though)

What you've done here, plenty of people have done before. What will make yours stand out? Why would they watch yours instead of someone else's motivational hero video. You have to have something that's different, something that's distinctly yours, instead of just redoing ideas presented by others (ex. VasDeferen's forward/rewind). There are some original parts (As I mentioned, the friends part), and that's a good start, but there's just not enough to make yours stand out enough to be distinctly "motivational" as you want it.

Equipment and stats (and maybe buffs to show any overpowered damage) are a huge motivator in this game. If you reveal those things , then that gives others something to strive for no? Now you did at times show your damage which is a good thing. Not really interested in what damage you take from monsters though.

What you showed in your video is something any person playing any class can experience. Sorry, this video doesn't motivate me to keep playing my Hero.

And yes the "my friends are important" thing might be overused, but that is the case for most people. And trying to improve myself isn't really an interesting theme.

Wow!
I like it! I wish somebody made something this good for corsairs!

Btw, what recorder/editor did you use?

I´ve used Sony Vegas Pro 8.0
And Fraps

To all the other comments;
I know it might not be motivational to all of you there might be some that might keep playing there character after seeing this some might not.
In the end it's just a video that has been made most likely for my self since this gives me a bit motivation to actually keep playing.
Even though im excited that actually some people do give go comments about anything someone made, since this is actually the first time someone made such a big comment about what could be better etc.
And I appreciate that alot, so thanks for the "feedback" and I will keep doing my best to make it as best as I could

Some Information about my equips:
I always was 2h in the past that's why I only have a reversed nibleheim I switched to 1h becouse I like it better but since I don't have a reversed yet I rather use my 2h sword at bosses.
Equips:
13 att White Work Glove (hammered)
128 att 13 STR Reversed Nibleheim (unhammered)
8 DEX Rose Earrings (unhammered)
19 str 7 acc Black Neos Top (unhammered)
16 dex 8 acc Green Neos Pants (unhammered)
14 att 7 str Maple Shield (unhammered)
119 att 11 STR Sparta (unhammered) * going to make a reversed executioners so I can stay 1h *
5 att 3 str PAC (unhammered)
12 Att MoN
3 att lilin's ring
Lv. 7 Blessing of the fairy

Thanks for sharing you gears. Personally, it's that stuff that motivates me. By seeing your gears and comparing them to my own I can see what needs improvement and focus on that which is motivation for me. Although, I kinda need motivation to log on these days, haha.

I'm not too picky about videos really. If it can keep my attention for the entire time without me closing the video, then I consider it a worthy video which is the case here.

Youri is ignoring me, how mean.