My Life Is [A Never-Ending Story]

Felix @ Oh okay, I didn't think of it like that, since it was so well written - very impressive for a fun and rushed fiction.

Feel free to ignore the suggestions then, if it's just for fun than ya don't need to be perfect. But still very enjoyable!

No one cared about that crap until you brought it up. Just saying. Also, "realize" is spelled with a "Z."

That is extremely rude to me, do not attack me for being unaware this was just a fun exercise.

And, where I live, realise is spelt with an s.

Felix @ Oh okay, I didn't think of it like that, since it was so well written - very impressive for a fun and rushed fiction.

Feel free to ignore the suggestions then, if it's just for fun than ya don't need to be perfect. But still very enjoyable!

Nah, it's all good. I definitely appreciate the concern! I'm happy so many people have been enjoying my story. It's not often I get to (or heck, allow myself to) write so carefree. Writing is a lot more fun when it's easy-going and for good people. If anything really becomes an issue, let me know. I'd have no problems changing it.

No need for any arguing guys. I'd be more worried about LIZOR CALIFORNIA right now if I were you.

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Or Fuzzbuns.

Whom you have denied.

[X] Tell Melanie about the nightmare you've been having.

Felix has come a long way from hating Melanie so there is no reason to keep such a thing a secret.

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Or Fuzzbuns.

Whom you have denied.

Poor Fuzzbuns, IT'S ALL YOUR FAULT SOUTHPERRY!!! Maybe Fuzzbuns would have had more luck if they were a dog.

Just to spite you guys:

Backstory 2. Fuzzbuns.

Saved by Felix when she was a newborn kitten, Fuzzbuns has been in his life ever since he was 10 years old. One day, while playing under his front porch, Felix heard the sweet, innocent "Mew...Mew..." of an abandoned kitten. Apparently unworthy of her mother's love, Fuzzbuns was left to die...all alone. Felix's heart opened and Fuzzbuns crawled inside. Ever since that day, she has been the Legard's faithful furball. The adorable name of Fuzzbuns was given to her by Felix after he noticed how absolutely fluffy and precious she was going to grow up and be. During the years after Felix's mother left, Fuzzbuns was always there to remind him he was never alone...and that his lap never needs to be cold.

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THAT IS THE FRIENDSHIP YOU DENIED.

No, I don't think this will be canon to the story...but it could have been!

@ Herbert, below

LOL FFFFFFFFFFFFF

STORY OVER GUYS. TIME PARADOX REVEALED.

I have a theory about Chad's diary:

 lol i write story

After all that Felix has been through he will finally know the contents of Chad's mysterious diary that led him to commit vicious acts of murder and act so violent. This diary has led Felix on his wild adventure for the last few weeks of his life. He is concerned about what he is going to find out about his father's "work". Felix starts to read the diary out loud:

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"My Life Is [A Never-Ending Story]. Hello, Southperry. My name is Kyle, and I'll be your guide through this exciting adventure. This is going to be like a game and a story. It's going to take a lot of work from me and interaction from you, the Southperrians, to make this a fun, enjoyable experience..."

[X] Tell Melanie about the nightmare you've been having.

no more lies. they would get the lake killed.

[x] Tell Melanie about the nightmare you've been having.

We have to save the lake!

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So obviously the voices can only interact with Felix at certain points. I assume that when the voices are bored and feel like being entertained, they watch Felix flail around helplessly in boredom?

So obviously the voices can only interact with Felix at certain points. I assume that when the voices are bored and feel like being entertained, they watch Felix flail around helplessly in boredom?

I haven't really developed the whole "voices" concept that greatly yet. The basics behind their involvement in Felix's life is that whenever he reaches a point where multiple choices present themselves, the voices wake up and "encourage" him to make a certain decision, based on what they feel is best. Often this causes conflict with what Felix wants and other times it helps give him ideas.

I have you guys playing the role of these voices. I've tried making the beginning of every entry a little piece of Felix's response to his voices' decision and the thoughts they shared. Sometimes the voices affect him so greatly that even their opinions manifest themselves in Felix's life. It's crude, but I try sticking to it and making it more apparent at times.

I guess at other times the voices, like you said, merely observe Felix and hope for a chance to express their will. Perhaps they even go dormant sometimes. Of course, what the voices even truly are and how Felix came to have them is all still a mystery. The only clue I've given about them was at the very beginning.

*hint hint*

Let me ask. When the story ends do you plan on starting it again from the beginning, a new story, or just nothing?

Also, do you plan on writing alternnative story-lines? After re-reading everything I would really like to see what the other choices would have lead to, like if you didn't get together with Melanie, if you played with Puzzbuns, if Joe and Tiff didn't get killed, and so on.

Of course, I could always make up those parts myself, but that is nowhere near as fun.

Let me ask. When the story ends do you plan on starting it again from the beginning, a new story, or just nothing?

It's a never-ending story.

[] Tell Melanie about the nightmare you've been having.

 I quote Felix:

We can't go on acting like we're okay with everything."
"Why are we pretending? Why try avoiding the pain?"

About the voices, is the only person he talked about it with, Rose?

About Fuzzbuns-

[k] Tell Melanie about the nightmare you've been having.

Murderer.

[] Tell Melanie about the nightmare you've been having.

Just read the whole story in 2 hours. Goddamn. Good stuff.

It's a never-ending story.

Kyle has said at least two times he wanted to post a BAD ENDING even if he said afterwards loading the story from the last choice (didn't know we were playing a VN. lol).

Plus, it actually has to end one day. Unless he wants to keep this thread up for the next 67 years.

Kyle has said at least two times he wanted to post a BAD ENDING even if he said afterwards loading the story from the last choice (didn't know we were playing a VN. lol).

Plus, it actually has to end one day. Unless he wants to keep this thread up for the next 67 years.

lol Yeah, I plan to have an ending to the story eventually. Originally, I planned to offer more "dangerous" choices or ones that just led (unfairly) to bad ends. However, as I got into the story and you guys managed to avoid obvious ones (like attacking Stan in his garage), I started to decide I preferred backtracking as little as possible. I haven't ruled out a BAD END appearing and forcing you guys to backtrack a bit, but I don't plan to make them frequent appearances.

If there's an interest in it, I will definitely let you guys make a different decision at really key points in the story and see how it branches differently from there. In that sense, it could live up to its name of "never-ending." There's a lot of possibilities. I just wouldn't wanna start doing this until you guys achieve your first "good" ending though.

As of Entry 41, I can safely say we're not even halfway done. I have a ton of ideas brewing now. We're just getting warmed up.

[X] Shrug it off and insist you're okay.

Spider bites.

[X] Tell Melanie about the nightmare you've been having.

no more lies. they would get the lake killed.

YA TOTALLY. We dun want a dead lake now do we?

Srs, tell her about the nightmare. MY SLEEP IS PLAGUED BY NIGHTMARES. I always tell my fiance. He's never too tired to listen.

[x] Tell Melanie about the nightmare you've been having.

She has the right to know, right?

[x] Tell Melanie about the nightmare you've been having

she reminds me so much of my ex gf ;_;

[x] Tell Melanie about the nightmare you've been having

she reminds me so much of my ex gf ;_;

yaiknowright?

[x] Tell Melanie about the nightmare you've been having

Felix...

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You're just waiting till Felix gets on a rooftop till you give us a bad end, aren't you?