My Life Is [A Never-Ending Story]

[x] Accept her offer and stay a while longer at Melanie's place.

It'll break her heart if you decline.

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Man, this thread is already getting some nice development; 10 pages! Keep up the epic writing, Kyle.

[x] Accept her offer and stay a while longer at Melanie's place.

BOW-CHIKA-BOW-WOW (Goddammit, why do I have to miss so much of this at work... ) Anyway, Felix deserves some more down time after today's stressful events... AND HE DIDN'T GET TO PLAY WITH FUZZBUNS, DAMMIT.

Also, "That boy is truly my son?" So Chad's a sneaky bastard who sucks at hiding his secrets? Fascinating and ominous... I hope Felix doesn't get hurt soon...

Man, this thread is already getting some nice development; 10 pages! Keep up the epic writing, Kyle.

Yes, I'm really happy! I'm glad you guys have been interested enough to join me in this and help give me something to write about. I appreciate it. I hope the interest continues (at least enough to keep choosing an option) and even grows. I like when people get into the story and analyze things. That's how I treat almost everything (books, VNs, anime, movies). I love reading the comments from you guys.

@ Herbert: Thanks for making me see I missed the word "care" in that sentence (take of). lol I dunno how I miss glaring errors like that after proofreading.

I notice a lot of people view this thread from time to time without sharing an opinion or picking an option! Don't do that guys! No reason to be shy. If you're reading the story, just pick which you think is best or most fun. I appreciate all contributions! All comments and choices help me know how to mold Felix's mind or where I should take the story.

Accurate depiction of me during this thread:

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Keep up the good work bro!

[X] Politely decline and suggest hanging out tomorrow.

PERVS!!! PERVS!!! PERVS!!!

[x] Accept her offer and stay a while longer at Melanie's place.
AND HE DIDN'T GET TO PLAY WITH FUZZBUNS, DAMMIT.

This.

[x] Accept her offer and stay a while longer at Melanie's place.

Let's extend the day for a while longer.

[X] Politely decline and suggest hanging out tomorrow.

PERVS!!! PERVS!!! PERVS!!!

You act like that is a bad thing.

Accurate depiction of me during this thread:

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I do the same.

@ Herbert: Thanks for making me see I missed the word "care" in that sentence (take of). lol I dunno how I miss glaring errors like that after proofreading.

Oh wow, I didn't realize it was missing either. I read it like "care" was always there, I'm serious.

[x] Accept her offer and stay a while longer at Melanie's place.

Just to get some story in before the time-skip.

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Me during this thread:

Hey, I was looking at other tabs for 30 minutes... HAY NEW ENTRY OMG.

You act like that is a bad thing.

I am the Catholic Voice. Regardless if Felix is actually Catholic or not.

[] Accept her offer and stay a while longer at Melanie's place.
[] Politely decline and suggest hanging out tomorrow.
[x] Decline like your usual self and head back home to end another crazy day.

[COLOR="RoyalBlue"]YOU GUYS SUCK. FIRST YOU DONT WANT THE BEST FOR MELANIE AND NOW YOU'RE HANGIN' WITH HER LIKE ITS ALL CHILL?

Also, just a question. I know its foreshadowing, but is this supposed to be like... sorta 3rd person omniscient narrator (written mostly in felix's view? Cause the part about Chad and the note strikes me as a bit odd)[/COLOR]

[X] Accept her offer and stay a while longer at Melanie's place.

"Thats because you are always blowing me off" oh bby

I am the Catholic Voice. Regardless if Felix is actually Catholic or not.

There is nothing anti-Catholic about spending some extra time at a friend's house, much less a friend that Felix has had very little to no interest in before the past couple of days.

It's not like this is gonna turn into some full-blown PWP fap-athon story. There's no harm in hanging out for a little while longer. (Or is there? DUN DUN DUN...)

@Zaotsu: Better us than Stan.

[x] Accept her offer and stay a while longer at Melanie's place.

Be nice and spend time with her.

I am the Catholic Voice. Regardless if Felix is actually Catholic or not.

you go girl

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There is nothing anti-Catholic about spending some extra time at a friend's house, much less a friend that Felix has had very little to no interest in before the past couple of days.

By the way the other voices are acting, Felix might do something. Plus, the parents aren't home .

[COLOR="RoyalBlue"]Man. At least this CYOA isn't filled with plantain moves like books such as Creature of Havok or House of Hell. I only link these because they are funny in showing how malicious a person can actually be in his or her writing.

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[X] Accept her offer and stay a while longer at Melanie's place.

You stay in her house. AND SHE STABS YOU.

The End.

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