An Area Idea... (Neotopia)

UnknownStory: First New Town (Patch: Tespia v.01)

WARNING: This is my first area idea, and is pretty much unfinished. This will be updated as ideas (and time) become available.

BETA: V.6
-Added this region's new main name: Exelebian (Chosen by me)
-Added more robotic monsters, and soon to be explained bosses.
-Added Secret Project progress and description.
-Found dedication to add a little more lol.

 Maps

 Exelebian Maps

1) Victoria Island: Kerning City
No Monsters; Linked to 2
2) Victoria Island: Unfinished Bridge
Slime x10, Orange Mushroom x13, Shroom x7, Pig x10, Red Snail x3; Linked to 1 and 3
3) Victoria Island: Oceanic Boundary
Cico x8, Krappy x10; Linked to 2 and 4
4) Exelebian: Water Roadway
Cico x15, Krappy x12, Freezer x10, Shark x3, Bone Fish x3, Cold Shark x1; Linked to 3 and 5
5) Exelebian: Sea Wall
Cico x6, Krappy x7, Jr. Seal x10 Linked to 4 and 6
6) Exelebian: Sandy Beach
Lorang x13, Clang x17 ;Linked to 5 and 7
7) Exelebian: Exelebiar
No Monsters; Linked to 6,8,10, and 11
8) Exelebian: The Prime Market
No Monsters; Linked to 7,9 and 10
9) Exelebian: Doors to Another Side
No Monsters; Linked to 8
10) Hidden Street: Exelebian: Charging Booths
Robotoid x1, Robo-guard x10; Linked to 7 and 8
11) Exelebian: City Limits
Robo-drone x25, Robovilian x17, Robo-guard x10, Robo-guard x5; Linked to 7 and 12
12) Exelebian: Broken Road
Robo-guard x10; Linked to 11 and 13
13) Exelebian: Grasslands
Robo-guard x3 Linked to 12 and 14
14) Exelebian: Sutra Park
Linked to 13 and 15
15) Exelebian: Exelebia Plain
Linked to 14 and 16
16) Exelebian: Buffalo Field
Linked to 15 and 17
17) Exelebian: The Lone Big Tree
Linked to 16 and 18
18) Exelebian: Cracked Land
Linked to 17 and 19
19) Exelebian: Border of the Natives
Linked to 18 and 20

 Kalishima Maps

20) Kalishima: First Cactus
Linked to 19 and 21
21) Kalishima: Canyon Road
Linked to 20 and 22
22) Kalishima: Migrated Buffalo Field
Linked to 21 and 23
23) Kalishima: Thorn Fields
Linked to 22,24 and 25
24) Hidden Street: Kalishima: Thorny Home
Spikelatee x1; Linked to 23
25) Kalishima: Native Village Outskirts
Linked to 23 and 26
26) Kalishima: Village Entrance
Linked to 25 and 27
27) Kalishima: Village of Kalishima
Linked to 26 and 28
28) Kalishima: A Rocky Road
Linked to 27 and 29
29) Kalishima: A Rocky Hill
Linked to 28

 Monsters

Robotoid (Exelebian Area Boss)
Level: 50/ HP: 25,000/ MP: 500/ EXP: 500
This is the leader of the robotic monsters of Exelebian. His HP is generally high for his level, and his MP is the same. Generally, his defense is average. All of his other stats are average. Except for the weapon attack! It's pretty high for the level! He can hit up to 300 without buffs! And his special attack can hit up to 1,000! He's tough, but easily beatable if you use strategy.

Spikelatee (Kalishima Area Boss)
Level: 70/ HP: 50,000/ MP: 1,000/ EXP: 3,000
A thorny monster that caused the thorn outbreak. His HP is generally low. The weapon defense and stats are generally low, too. His weapon is average, about 600. His magic attack is what makes him a challenge! He has 1 attack that doesn't miss that hits about 1,500. But then there's an attack that can hit up to 3,000!! Luckily, he only does it at very low HP (5,000 or less). He's a bit of wild one, but pretty easy overall.

Hyper Desert Giant (??? Area Boss)
Details coming soon...

Robo-Neptune (Boss)
Details coming soon...

Robo-Hades (Boss)
Details coming soon...

Robo-Zeus (Boss)
Details coming soon...

The Crane (Boss)
Details coming soon...

Robo-drone~ Level: 10/ HP: 75/ MP: 0/ EXP: 17
A simple andriod. Nothing special!

Robovilian~ Level: 17/ HP: 250/ MP: 30/ EXP: 32
A robotic civillian. Another simple android!

Robo-block~ Level: 23/ HP: 600/ MP: 50/ EXP: 48
Unlike the previous robots, this one has a specific use! This is meant to block out intruders before they reach the higher leveled robots. And it does so with its defense buff. It doesn't do much good though, but it does better than nothing at all!

Robo-guard~ Level: 30/ HP: 1,000/ MP: 100/ EXP: 64
The standard robotic guard. No special abilities, or attack. But it's HP is generally higher than most monsters its level. And the HP to EXP ratio is pretty average.

Robo-guard X~ Level: 35/ HP: 2,000/ MP: 160/ EXP: 96
The newer, stronger robotic guard. It's sorta hard to tell the 2 types apart, but there's a clue. Generally only uses defense and attack buffs. The 2nd of the 3 robotic ranks.

Robo-guard XYZ~ Level: 40/ HP:2,500/ MP: 200/ EXP: 124
The strongest of the robo-guard ranks. Unlike the others, this one easily stands out in the crowds, so finding 1 in a large crowd is easy. It also has a special earthquake attack. It's relatively weak, and easily avoidable. May have been created by the creator of the Rombot.

Fox-cub~ Level: 7/ HP: 60/ MP: 3/ EXP: 12
A cute little cub of a fox! It's nearly harmless!

Foxidillo~ Level: 10/ HP: 100/ MP: 10/ EXP: 18
An interbreed of a fox and an armadillo. It has pretty high defense for its level, and its HP is slightly above average, too.

Shellfox~ Level: 10/ HP: 100/ MP: 25/ EXP: 20
A fox developed with more armadillo adaptations. Has the same stats as thr Foxidillo, but with higher defense.

Dog-frog~ Level: 13/ HP: 180/ MP: 30/ EXP: 23
An amphibious dog. It has the abilities to jump, and has high speed, too. A basic animal. Excluding the cross, nothing out of the ordinary!

Dog-Toad~ Level: 17/ HP: 300/ MP: 30/ EXP: 27
A dog merged to a toad. Unlike other monsters, this has a strange ability: It hurts you with its tongue, and it stuns you for a prolonged period of time. Be careful if you're low-leveled!

Armed-adillo~ Level: 23/ HP: 750/ MP: 50/ EXP: 36
An armored armadillo. Nothing really! But its HP is fairly high for its level, I'll say that much.

Other Monsters in Areas (already exist): Slime, Orange Mushroom, Shroom, Red Snail, Pig, Cico, Freezer, Krappy, Jr. Seal, Lorang, Clang, Shark (rare), Bone Fish (rare), and Cold Shark (rarest)

More monster coming soon...

 Story

Exelebian wasn't always called by that name. In the beginning, it was called "The Land". This is what the natives, known only as the Reverants, called it. They performed ceremonies and rituals peacefully on the barren land. It was very peaceful... Until one day. Chief Galloping Goat was about to send someone to his death for treason. At that moment, the prisoner broke free! Him, and several others moved farther north up the mountains. Boasting his victory, the prisoner laughed in a way that put Chief Galloping Goat into sickness. He died about a week after. At that time, the prisoner came back, and took over. He exiled all but his loyal friends from the village. Some went west to unknown land. But some came to the east, where Exelebian would soon be built! Villagers built and built and built... But nothing worked. They lived dreadfully until the day a man named "Sutra" came along. He was a bit of a dull bulb, but knew what was right. He helped the villagers build with futuristic tehnology... But once again, nothing worked. After, some of the history was erased by an unknown suspect. We'll skip to the part of Neotopia and Kerning City. Nella, who was curious at the time, wanted to see the ocean. In a case of unfortunate events, she fell in! As time passed, she was spotted by the villagers, and carried to safety. Sutra was suspicious of her, but trusted her well enough! Eventually, they became great friends! But one day, Nella was crying at the cliff. She feared that she could never return to Kerning City! As one last kind gesture to Nella, Sutra and the villagers made a raft out of the little supplies there were. Soon, Nella returned to Kerning City! She was so happy for what the villagers did, she started to build a bridge to the land mass. The project was dropped after a year's worth of work. She could never go to Exelebian again... Or could she? She could. The people of Kerning City put aside their differences, and made a ferry going to Exelebian! And it was specially for Nella! She sailed there only to realize the land was in shambles. Not a breath breathed in, not a sound for miles, not a sight anywhere! Except for a strange, dark figure. He seemed to look a lot like Sutra. But as soon as his head turned toward Nella, it was clear that it wasn't Sutra at all! He destroyed the village and killed all of the noticable natives! At a quick glance, Nella escaped. She decided to never go back again. Or so she had thought. About 10 years after the incident, Sutra washed up on Kerning City's shore. He was bloody, unkept, and unconcious. Nella was the first to notice. She cried her heart out until the point Sutra woke up! He awoke telling of his tail. To put it shortly, he said: "That figure is a relative of mine. We've always been bitter rivals for thousands of years! He took revenge by destroying the village, and nearly killing me in the process! I have come to ask for your help. Please help me build the utopia I always imagined. I will protect you from my relative's wrath. I promise. And if that promise is ever broken, I shall be sacrificed in the name of you." Nella, having been shocked from the story, stood speechless. With only a single tear running down her cheek. Having felt true sorrow in her heart, she had no choice but to accept! She called out to everybody to bring supplies and material. All of the townspeople in a rush to help Nella! They all sailed to the land once known as Exelebian. While Sutra's relative chuckled at his victory, the people built what is now Neotopia City. It was a futuristic, yet classy marvel! The structures were so sturdy, not even the strongest of wrecking balls, or machinery, could ever destroy thes buildings! Exelebian came to be just as Sutra drempt of! The city ran perfectly in harmony, and secrecy, for several years. Soon, Black Jack, the map expert of the Natuilus, found a fold in the large map facing him. This flap revealed land. Land left unexplored by everybody other than the citizens of Kerning City. Jack had to see it for himself! Less than a year later, he told of his ventures to the rest of the Maple world. Word quick spread of this new land! And now it is free to explore by people like YOU! The ferry opened up, and YOU'RE invited!

 NPCs

NPCs coming soon...

 Quests

Quests coming soon...

 Expectations For Next Patch/Update

-All higher-leveled animal monsters to be added.
-To finish Secret Project at an unknown time.
-To add more maps (Kuulian, Terropianco, (?)Remains of Ancient Earth(?)) soon.
-Boss descriptions coming soon.
-To add NPCs soon.
-To reveal more of a spoiler on my newest project-to-be.
-Adding quests soon.
-Adding special events and other things (which will be withheld until release) soon after, likely in another thread.
-Will add final touches to story.

WARNING: Unless you want a teaser of my newest idea, DO NOT OPEN THE NEXT SPOILER!!!

 Next Patch Spoiler

"At the flash within the darkness, we find hope for our foresaken village." -Calivien (Kalienstien Village Elder)

 Secret Project

??? Coming Soon ??? (Progress: 50%; This took a quicker time than I thought! Though the project looks crude, and needs more details.)

That's all I got so far! Any ideas? Give me your ideas please! I love opinion!
Just so long as it isn't a flame like ("scrap this idea it's stink you're noob"). If you think so, tell me kindly ("The idea is OK, but you could do better.") Ahead of time, thanks for feedback!!

EDIT: I may be out for some time. Haven't really got to play MapleStory for a while (or have off ). So I'm enjoying the time I do have! I may change soon, I may not. Just wait and see...

Title the spoilers?

Title the spoilers?

I don't know what you mean. "Title the spoilers?" What do you mean by that? :f6:

This is how you put it in (without the spaces.)

 haigaiz

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 haigaiz

see?

This is how you put it in (without the spaces.)

 haigaiz

[ /spoiler]

 haigaiz

see?

Thanks, I wondered how people did that!
And now I know!
Thank you for the help, man. See ya round!

So is Kalishima like a KFT type town? or Kerning?

To anybody wondering, Neotopia is a grassy, but futuristic society, similar slightly to NLC.

Kalishima is part Ariant, part Perion. The first part is Ariant, but the farther you go, it more resembles Perion.

I'll add to the list as more places are added.

Nice ideas, just put a bit more detail into them especially the maps and monsters and it'll be better.

With your last post on my ideas, well it's called creativity and it can really inspire you into creating something big.

So overall, add some more data into the monsters and map info. I really liked your background story though, no really.

Nice ideas, just put a bit more detail into them especially the maps and monsters and it'll be better. Thanks, still working on it, though. What can I say? A work in progress is never right the 1st time around!

With your last post on my ideas, well it's called creativity and it can really inspire you into creating something big. I'll keep that in mind. Just kinda "bleh" becuase of the impressions I may get.

So overall, add some more data into the monsters and map info. I really liked your background story though, no really. Really? Lol, thanks!

I truly appreciate the feedback! This time, I'm REALLY gonna work on this piece here. Might be a bit sloppy, but hey. Whatever gets the job done!

Change the name.
Neotopia = Neopets.
I know it sounds small, but it really really needs a different name.

Change the name.
Neotopia = Neopets. Lol, never came to mind.
I know it sounds small, but it really really needs a different name. Sure! Why not!?

So a new name shall be deciced! Though I don't know to decide... I got other names. But there's so many ways to decide upon a name! I'll get back to you on that.