2012-09-03, 03:41 PM
Seems pretty nice. Not sure how I feel about the fight limits, especially since you can fight them within the party quest. (certain classes at least.)
I'd almost include completion of the party quest as one of Jack's quests, and then a few follow-up quests to explain what was happening in the keep. End it with you finding Christopher Crimsonheart's grave (What the twisted Grandmasters were after), where you could find "Valued possessions left behind for one worthy", of which could include a quest item(could be what the twisted grandmasters were after specifically) to unlock the next theme dungeon.
I didn't see your story before the bit about a pirate soldier was mentioned, but I'd see no problem with there being Pirate soldiers in Versal. MV would probably get added in as another spawn of Versal sent by Naricain to raid Crimsonheart's tomb.
I'd almost include completion of the party quest as one of Jack's quests, and then a few follow-up quests to explain what was happening in the keep. End it with you finding Christopher Crimsonheart's grave (What the twisted Grandmasters were after), where you could find "Valued possessions left behind for one worthy", of which could include a quest item(could be what the twisted grandmasters were after specifically) to unlock the next theme dungeon.
I didn't see your story before the bit about a pirate soldier was mentioned, but I'd see no problem with there being Pirate soldiers in Versal. MV would probably get added in as another spawn of Versal sent by Naricain to raid Crimsonheart's tomb.