2012-08-12, 06:45 PM
Hey Bluffed!
I love that you've put the effort to post videos like this! It's so time consuming and it's hard to keep up!
I don't know much about editing but it looks fine to me! and I liked the concept on the first one!
This is just based off the first video!
I'm not sure which demo', age group, style of person you're trying to target, but maybe it would be best to comment on each outfit? Maybe say why: you chose it/it works/it's on trend. and where you'd wear it perhaps? You did a great job citing the items for each look though (which I know girls would love you for!!).
As for styling, I feel as if the scarves are drowning/cluttering the pants, so maybe some scarfs should be taken out so it doesn't appear so heavy. I like the diversity of palettes through the 10 looks, but times the silhouette look's repeated (oversized top/scarfs/leather pant).
I'm assuming the smokin' hot leather pants are the statement piece! So it would be fitting to work around it rather than dilute them! other than that! I think you did a good job!
You're so cute! Keep up the good work!
I love that you've put the effort to post videos like this! It's so time consuming and it's hard to keep up!
I don't know much about editing but it looks fine to me! and I liked the concept on the first one!
This is just based off the first video!
I'm not sure which demo', age group, style of person you're trying to target, but maybe it would be best to comment on each outfit? Maybe say why: you chose it/it works/it's on trend. and where you'd wear it perhaps? You did a great job citing the items for each look though (which I know girls would love you for!!).
As for styling, I feel as if the scarves are drowning/cluttering the pants, so maybe some scarfs should be taken out so it doesn't appear so heavy. I like the diversity of palettes through the 10 looks, but times the silhouette look's repeated (oversized top/scarfs/leather pant).
I'm assuming the smokin' hot leather pants are the statement piece! So it would be fitting to work around it rather than dilute them! other than that! I think you did a good job!
You're so cute! Keep up the good work!