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#220
2012-06-04, 03:41 PM
Daakun Wrote:*ahem*

Yo, I'm the Black Mage and I'm here to stay,
You think you've sealed me away? I'm back the next day.
I've got ice and that's no joke,
That's the price for fighting me, folks.
Even from my prison my power has arisen,
Shattered the world with just a pinky I twirled.


...that was terrible and I'm sooo sooo sorry. >_>

A for effort. Syllable count was a bit off in some places. Rhymes were a bit forced in some places. Not bad for a first effort.
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GMS v111 - Back to the old Maple - by Fiel - 2012-05-31, 05:39 PM
GMS v111 - Back to the old Maple - by Fiel - 2012-05-31, 05:42 PM
GMS v111 - Back to the old Maple - by Leaves - 2012-05-31, 05:44 PM
GMS v111 - Back to the old Maple - by Viaje - 2012-05-31, 05:45 PM
GMS v111 - Back to the old Maple - by PirateIzzy - 2012-05-31, 05:46 PM
GMS v111 - Back to the old Maple - by SwordStaker - 2012-05-31, 05:47 PM
GMS v111 - Back to the old Maple - by Leaves - 2012-05-31, 05:48 PM
GMS v111 - Back to the old Maple - by PirateIzzy - 2012-05-31, 05:48 PM
GMS v111 - Back to the old Maple - by Viaje - 2012-05-31, 05:49 PM
GMS v111 - Back to the old Maple - by English - 2012-05-31, 05:49 PM
GMS v111 - Back to the old Maple - by PirateIzzy - 2012-05-31, 05:50 PM
GMS v111 - Back to the old Maple - by Viaje - 2012-05-31, 05:52 PM
GMS v111 - Back to the old Maple - by Fiel - 2012-05-31, 05:52 PM
GMS v111 - Back to the old Maple - by Kirov - 2012-05-31, 05:54 PM
GMS v111 - Back to the old Maple - by Yuel - 2012-05-31, 05:54 PM
GMS v111 - Back to the old Maple - by Razmos - 2012-05-31, 05:55 PM
GMS v111 - Back to the old Maple - by Leaves - 2012-05-31, 05:56 PM
GMS v111 - Back to the old Maple - by Yorckie - 2012-05-31, 05:56 PM
GMS v111 - Back to the old Maple - by Dark Link - 2012-05-31, 05:58 PM
GMS v111 - Back to the old Maple - by SwordStaker - 2012-05-31, 05:58 PM
GMS v111 - Back to the old Maple - by Zelkova - 2012-05-31, 06:01 PM
GMS v111 - Back to the old Maple - by Viaje - 2012-05-31, 06:04 PM
GMS v111 - Back to the old Maple - by SaptaZapta - 2012-05-31, 06:06 PM
GMS v111 - Back to the old Maple - by Untradeable - 2012-05-31, 06:14 PM
GMS v111 - Back to the old Maple - by fodjgngf - 2012-05-31, 06:19 PM
GMS v111 - Back to the old Maple - by MrFry - 2012-05-31, 06:21 PM
GMS v111 - Back to the old Maple - by JpopBoi - 2012-05-31, 06:21 PM
GMS v111 - Back to the old Maple - by Aggravate - 2012-05-31, 06:27 PM
GMS v111 - Back to the old Maple - by Kalemora - 2012-05-31, 06:27 PM
GMS v111 - Back to the old Maple - by Kirov - 2012-05-31, 06:28 PM
GMS v111 - Back to the old Maple - by Green4Ever - 2012-05-31, 06:29 PM
GMS v111 - Back to the old Maple - by Viaje - 2012-05-31, 06:29 PM
GMS v111 - Back to the old Maple - by Kalemora - 2012-05-31, 06:31 PM
GMS v111 - Back to the old Maple - by Raul - 2012-05-31, 06:35 PM
GMS v111 - Back to the old Maple - by Viaje - 2012-05-31, 06:38 PM
GMS v111 - Back to the old Maple - by EternalRain - 2012-05-31, 06:39 PM
GMS v111 - Back to the old Maple - by Razmos - 2012-05-31, 06:41 PM
GMS v111 - Back to the old Maple - by fodjgngf - 2012-05-31, 06:41 PM
GMS v111 - Back to the old Maple - by Animation - 2012-05-31, 06:43 PM
GMS v111 - Back to the old Maple - by Takebacker - 2012-05-31, 06:44 PM
GMS v111 - Back to the old Maple - by Imagine - 2012-05-31, 06:45 PM
GMS v111 - Back to the old Maple - by Untradeable - 2012-05-31, 06:55 PM
GMS v111 - Back to the old Maple - by Yorckie - 2012-05-31, 07:02 PM
GMS v111 - Back to the old Maple - by dr4ngd - 2012-05-31, 07:09 PM
GMS v111 - Back to the old Maple - by SwordStaker - 2012-05-31, 07:10 PM
GMS v111 - Back to the old Maple - by OldManMaple - 2012-05-31, 07:15 PM
GMS v111 - Back to the old Maple - by Arrol - 2012-05-31, 07:19 PM
GMS v111 - Back to the old Maple - by OldManMaple - 2012-05-31, 07:24 PM
GMS v111 - Back to the old Maple - by Razmos - 2012-05-31, 07:25 PM
GMS v111 - Back to the old Maple - by Viaje - 2012-05-31, 07:41 PM
GMS v111 - Back to the old Maple - by danielcatu - 2012-05-31, 07:44 PM
GMS v111 - Back to the old Maple - by PirateIzzy - 2012-05-31, 08:20 PM
GMS v111 - Back to the old Maple - by fodjgngf - 2012-05-31, 08:21 PM
GMS v111 - Back to the old Maple - by donovan - 2012-05-31, 08:28 PM
GMS v111 - Back to the old Maple - by Arrol - 2012-05-31, 08:34 PM
GMS v111 - Back to the old Maple - by Raul - 2012-05-31, 08:37 PM
GMS v111 - Back to the old Maple - by Devil - 2012-05-31, 08:45 PM
GMS v111 - Back to the old Maple - by OldManMaple - 2012-05-31, 08:45 PM
GMS v111 - Back to the old Maple - by Bomber - 2012-05-31, 08:53 PM
GMS v111 - Back to the old Maple - by Takebacker - 2012-05-31, 08:59 PM
GMS v111 - Back to the old Maple - by Locked - 2012-05-31, 09:20 PM
GMS v111 - Back to the old Maple - by Mandalay - 2012-05-31, 09:37 PM
GMS v111 - Back to the old Maple - by Justin - 2012-05-31, 09:56 PM
GMS v111 - Back to the old Maple - by Coogi - 2012-05-31, 10:02 PM
GMS v111 - Back to the old Maple - by Untradeable - 2012-05-31, 10:11 PM
GMS v111 - Back to the old Maple - by danielcatu - 2012-05-31, 10:30 PM
GMS v111 - Back to the old Maple - by Bomber - 2012-05-31, 11:16 PM
GMS v111 - Back to the old Maple - by Inferno - 2012-05-31, 11:27 PM
GMS v111 - Back to the old Maple - by Dark Zero - 2012-05-31, 11:50 PM
GMS v111 - Back to the old Maple - by Viaje - 2012-06-01, 12:36 AM
GMS v111 - Back to the old Maple - by SaptaZapta - 2012-06-01, 12:53 AM
GMS v111 - Back to the old Maple - by Jackie - 2012-06-01, 12:58 AM
GMS v111 - Back to the old Maple - by Viaje - 2012-06-01, 01:00 AM
GMS v111 - Back to the old Maple - by Justin - 2012-06-01, 01:23 AM
GMS v111 - Back to the old Maple - by Fuzz - 2012-06-01, 02:01 AM
GMS v111 - Back to the old Maple - by Razmos - 2012-06-01, 02:08 AM
GMS v111 - Back to the old Maple - by Icho - 2012-06-01, 02:32 AM
GMS v111 - Back to the old Maple - by Secun - 2012-06-01, 03:02 AM
GMS v111 - Back to the old Maple - by Eyon - 2012-06-01, 07:04 AM
GMS v111 - Back to the old Maple - by CarrionCrow - 2012-06-01, 07:07 AM
GMS v111 - Back to the old Maple - by Thorr - 2012-06-01, 08:14 AM
GMS v111 - Back to the old Maple - by Avith - 2012-06-01, 08:22 AM
GMS v111 - Back to the old Maple - by Fiel - 2012-06-01, 08:25 AM
GMS v111 - Back to the old Maple - by Enzyme - 2012-06-01, 08:34 AM
GMS v111 - Back to the old Maple - by Eyon - 2012-06-01, 09:00 AM
GMS v111 - Back to the old Maple - by xAyakoCx - 2012-06-01, 09:01 AM
GMS v111 - Back to the old Maple - by Grey - 2012-06-01, 09:06 AM
GMS v111 - Back to the old Maple - by Eyon - 2012-06-01, 09:09 AM
GMS v111 - Back to the old Maple - by Skylit - 2012-06-01, 09:25 AM
GMS v111 - Back to the old Maple - by Thorr - 2012-06-01, 09:28 AM
GMS v111 - Back to the old Maple - by Eyon - 2012-06-01, 09:38 AM
GMS v111 - Back to the old Maple - by Thorr - 2012-06-01, 09:45 AM
GMS v111 - Back to the old Maple - by Eyon - 2012-06-01, 09:59 AM
GMS v111 - Back to the old Maple - by Untradeable - 2012-06-01, 10:06 AM
GMS v111 - Back to the old Maple - by Thorr - 2012-06-01, 10:14 AM
GMS v111 - Back to the old Maple - by Untradeable - 2012-06-01, 10:16 AM
GMS v111 - Back to the old Maple - by Fiel - 2012-06-01, 10:37 AM
GMS v111 - Back to the old Maple - by Eyon - 2012-06-01, 10:52 AM
GMS v111 - Back to the old Maple - by Untradeable - 2012-06-01, 10:58 AM
GMS v111 - Back to the old Maple - by Thorr - 2012-06-01, 11:01 AM
GMS v111 - Back to the old Maple - by Kirov - 2012-06-01, 11:05 AM
GMS v111 - Back to the old Maple - by Pink Bean - 2012-06-01, 11:21 AM
GMS v111 - Back to the old Maple - by CarrionCrow - 2012-06-01, 11:30 AM
GMS v111 - Back to the old Maple - by Razmos - 2012-06-01, 11:43 AM
GMS v111 - Back to the old Maple - by Thorr - 2012-06-01, 11:48 AM
GMS v111 - Back to the old Maple - by Kirov - 2012-06-01, 11:50 AM
GMS v111 - Back to the old Maple - by Grey - 2012-06-01, 12:16 PM
GMS v111 - Back to the old Maple - by Viaje - 2012-06-01, 12:16 PM
GMS v111 - Back to the old Maple - by Secun - 2012-06-01, 12:28 PM
GMS v111 - Back to the old Maple - by Eyon - 2012-06-01, 12:38 PM
GMS v111 - Back to the old Maple - by Razmos - 2012-06-01, 12:41 PM
GMS v111 - Back to the old Maple - by Viaje - 2012-06-01, 12:46 PM
GMS v111 - Back to the old Maple - by Secun - 2012-06-01, 12:57 PM
GMS v111 - Back to the old Maple - by Eyon - 2012-06-01, 12:58 PM
GMS v111 - Back to the old Maple - by Viaje - 2012-06-01, 01:09 PM
GMS v111 - Back to the old Maple - by SaptaZapta - 2012-06-01, 01:15 PM
GMS v111 - Back to the old Maple - by Eyon - 2012-06-01, 01:20 PM
GMS v111 - Back to the old Maple - by Enzyme - 2012-06-01, 01:23 PM
GMS v111 - Back to the old Maple - by Viaje - 2012-06-01, 01:30 PM
GMS v111 - Back to the old Maple - by Eyon - 2012-06-01, 01:45 PM
GMS v111 - Back to the old Maple - by Viaje - 2012-06-01, 01:56 PM
GMS v111 - Back to the old Maple - by Phoenix - 2012-06-01, 01:56 PM
GMS v111 - Back to the old Maple - by ElderTree - 2012-06-01, 01:59 PM
GMS v111 - Back to the old Maple - by Viaje - 2012-06-01, 02:09 PM
GMS v111 - Back to the old Maple - by Phoenix - 2012-06-01, 02:12 PM
GMS v111 - Back to the old Maple - by Viaje - 2012-06-01, 02:16 PM
GMS v111 - Back to the old Maple - by MrFry - 2012-06-01, 02:59 PM
GMS v111 - Back to the old Maple - by hadriel - 2012-06-01, 02:59 PM
GMS v111 - Back to the old Maple - by Yorckie - 2012-06-01, 03:32 PM
GMS v111 - Back to the old Maple - by Xsimonsays - 2012-06-01, 03:56 PM
GMS v111 - Back to the old Maple - by Arrol - 2012-06-01, 04:01 PM
GMS v111 - Back to the old Maple - by ODERS - 2012-06-01, 04:34 PM
GMS v111 - Back to the old Maple - by Dark Zero - 2012-06-01, 05:50 PM
GMS v111 - Back to the old Maple - by Eyon - 2012-06-01, 06:14 PM
GMS v111 - Back to the old Maple - by Dark Link - 2012-06-01, 09:10 PM
GMS v111 - Back to the old Maple - by Icho - 2012-06-02, 02:07 AM
GMS v111 - Back to the old Maple - by Liteness - 2012-06-02, 02:48 AM
GMS v111 - Back to the old Maple - by Liteness - 2012-06-02, 01:59 PM
GMS v111 - Back to the old Maple - by Viaje - 2012-06-02, 03:36 PM
GMS v111 - Back to the old Maple - by Takebacker - 2012-06-02, 03:39 PM
GMS v111 - Back to the old Maple - by Worthyness - 2012-06-02, 04:34 PM
GMS v111 - Back to the old Maple - by SaptaZapta - 2012-06-02, 04:46 PM
GMS v111 - Back to the old Maple - by Worthyness - 2012-06-02, 05:27 PM
GMS v111 - Back to the old Maple - by CarrionCrow - 2012-06-02, 05:40 PM
GMS v111 - Back to the old Maple - by Worthyness - 2012-06-02, 05:50 PM
GMS v111 - Back to the old Maple - by MrTouchnGo - 2012-06-02, 06:26 PM
GMS v111 - Back to the old Maple - by Takebacker - 2012-06-02, 06:27 PM
GMS v111 - Back to the old Maple - by MrTouchnGo - 2012-06-02, 06:31 PM
GMS v111 - Back to the old Maple - by Devil - 2012-06-02, 07:23 PM
GMS v111 - Back to the old Maple - by Justin - 2012-06-02, 07:42 PM
GMS v111 - Back to the old Maple - by SaptaZapta - 2012-06-02, 08:19 PM
GMS v111 - Back to the old Maple - by Viaje - 2012-06-02, 08:40 PM
GMS v111 - Back to the old Maple - by Fiel - 2012-06-02, 09:41 PM
GMS v111 - Back to the old Maple - by Evolite - 2012-06-02, 11:05 PM
GMS v111 - Back to the old Maple - by Worthyness - 2012-06-03, 12:15 AM
GMS v111 - Back to the old Maple - by Secun - 2012-06-03, 01:48 AM
GMS v111 - Back to the old Maple - by Coogi - 2012-06-03, 11:23 AM
GMS v111 - Back to the old Maple - by Devil - 2012-06-03, 02:37 PM
GMS v111 - Back to the old Maple - by Devil - 2012-06-03, 08:23 PM
GMS v111 - Back to the old Maple - by MrTouchnGo - 2012-06-03, 08:36 PM
GMS v111 - Back to the old Maple - by Locked - 2012-06-03, 08:54 PM
GMS v111 - Back to the old Maple - by nRxUs - 2012-06-03, 08:56 PM
GMS v111 - Back to the old Maple - by Arrol - 2012-06-03, 08:56 PM
GMS v111 - Back to the old Maple - by MrTouchnGo - 2012-06-03, 09:00 PM
GMS v111 - Back to the old Maple - by Raul - 2012-06-03, 09:06 PM
GMS v111 - Back to the old Maple - by Locked - 2012-06-03, 09:06 PM
GMS v111 - Back to the old Maple - by SaptaZapta - 2012-06-03, 09:06 PM
GMS v111 - Back to the old Maple - by TeruTeru - 2012-06-03, 09:10 PM
GMS v111 - Back to the old Maple - by Devil - 2012-06-03, 09:16 PM
GMS v111 - Back to the old Maple - by Raul - 2012-06-03, 09:28 PM
GMS v111 - Back to the old Maple - by MrTouchnGo - 2012-06-03, 10:07 PM
GMS v111 - Back to the old Maple - by Arrol - 2012-06-03, 10:19 PM
GMS v111 - Back to the old Maple - by Devil - 2012-06-03, 11:13 PM
GMS v111 - Back to the old Maple - by MrTouchnGo - 2012-06-03, 11:52 PM
GMS v111 - Back to the old Maple - by Locked - 2012-06-04, 12:11 AM
GMS v111 - Back to the old Maple - by MrTouchnGo - 2012-06-04, 12:15 AM
GMS v111 - Back to the old Maple - by ksidirt - 2012-06-04, 12:24 AM
GMS v111 - Back to the old Maple - by Locked - 2012-06-04, 12:29 AM
GMS v111 - Back to the old Maple - by ksidirt - 2012-06-04, 12:31 AM
GMS v111 - Back to the old Maple - by Arrol - 2012-06-04, 12:51 AM
GMS v111 - Back to the old Maple - by SaptaZapta - 2012-06-04, 04:38 AM
GMS v111 - Back to the old Maple - by Dark Link - 2012-06-04, 06:02 AM
GMS v111 - Back to the old Maple - by Devil - 2012-06-04, 09:54 AM
GMS v111 - Back to the old Maple - by Alloy - 2012-06-04, 10:29 AM
GMS v111 - Back to the old Maple - by Daakun - 2012-06-04, 11:58 AM
GMS v111 - Back to the old Maple - by Raul - 2012-06-04, 03:41 PM
GMS v111 - Back to the old Maple - by TeruTeru - 2012-06-04, 03:56 PM
GMS v111 - Back to the old Maple - by VerrKol - 2012-06-04, 04:00 PM
GMS v111 - Back to the old Maple - by TeruTeru - 2012-06-04, 05:12 PM
GMS v111 - Back to the old Maple - by Spadow - 2012-06-05, 09:56 AM
GMS v111 - Back to the old Maple - by Kirov - 2012-06-05, 10:18 AM
GMS v111 - Back to the old Maple - by Arrol - 2012-06-05, 04:30 PM
GMS v111 - Back to the old Maple - by Daakun - 2012-06-05, 05:08 PM
GMS v111 - Back to the old Maple - by PirateIzzy - 2012-06-05, 08:05 PM
GMS v111 - Back to the old Maple - by TeruTeru - 2012-06-09, 01:01 PM
GMS v111 - Back to the old Maple - by HandsFolded - 2012-06-09, 11:44 PM
GMS v111 - Back to the old Maple - by Phoenix - 2012-06-12, 11:16 PM
GMS v111 - Back to the old Maple - by TeruTeru - 2012-06-12, 11:37 PM

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