Some kind of Fantasy Bird

She means that the wings are a little strange and different from how they really work. I don't really know how to say that, but yours lack a little of the "freedom" the shape and feathers give to the wings, it's something free, instead of having such a fixed shape.

Try something like this, sorry for not being so clear, i'm on the other comp and only got a mouse. :S

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Oic. Yeah, the pose I selected does not do freedom much justice. There are a couple real life examples where the wings really do look like that though, but it's not much of an excuse in this case.

Thanks for the criticism.