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Attention!!!
#8
"We have been waiting for you to contact us for your Package that is been
registered with us for shipping to your residential location."

Edited:

We have been waiting for you to contact us for your package that has been regeistered with us. We need your information to ship it to your residential location.


Even then, it could be reworded better. Most companies would NOT make a simple mistake of "that is been". They would have drafts proof-readed over and over. I see other mistakes in there as well, and going by Nexon standards, there's too many. :X
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Attention!!! - by Peculator - 2008-11-14, 10:19 PM
Attention!!! - by Corn - 2008-11-14, 10:20 PM
Attention!!! - by IsaacGS - 2008-11-14, 10:33 PM
Attention!!! - by Manda - 2008-11-16, 11:04 AM
Attention!!! - by Ryuzaki - 2008-11-16, 01:01 PM
Attention!!! - by psychopat - 2008-11-16, 01:09 PM
Attention!!! - by Trystan28 - 2008-11-16, 02:01 PM
Attention!!! - by NoJobNoRules - 2008-11-16, 06:55 PM
Attention!!! - by Peculator - 2008-11-17, 07:07 AM

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