Maplestory: Class Montages! Sneak Peak Ft. Mercedes

Basically what you posted took no effort and was just random clips with no editing to them :p

And yet, it was good, simple and IMHO a hundred times more appealing than yours :/ You also used way too many effects/zooms/whatever.

Clips don't have to be edited or given a special effect to be good, the right combination of sound and clips can make even simple montages be very very good and appealing.