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Requesting some help please
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raizoo Wrote:Yeah, his face is a bit off. I think his eyes are a little too far apart and his earlobe looks funny.

The entire left arm is off ― not even going to mention dat hand. He's in a sort of 3/4 view pose yet his arm looks flat as it sticks out to the side. It's a bit of a tricky pose and it looks like you're trying to make it easier for yourself. You might want to lower the shoulder a bit as well.

His right arm also looks like it's curving with the body, but that's prolly cuz it's a wip still. ;-;

The body looks okay, but the pelvis might be positioned weirdly depending on what pose he'll take. It'll definitely be a little weird if he's standing. I was having fun rotating him clock-wise a bit before my program exploded to make him look off-centre and moar crazeh.

Ah thanks for critique Biggrin -I have so many opinions on this whole drawing I dont know where to start Stunned - But I moved his eye a bit towards the right.. and tried to get his right hand to well..look like a hand abit more. If anything its just the left side thats giving the trouble. But I hope to figure it out soon.

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Requesting some help please - by PervyLion - 2012-02-01, 04:52 PM
Requesting some help please - by MariettaRC - 2012-02-01, 05:08 PM
Requesting some help please - by PervyLion - 2012-02-01, 05:13 PM
Requesting some help please - by raizoo - 2012-02-02, 02:06 AM
Requesting some help please - by PervyLion - 2012-02-02, 02:46 AM
Requesting some help please - by raizoo - 2012-02-02, 03:19 AM

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