2012-02-02, 02:46 AM
raizoo Wrote:Yeah, his face is a bit off. I think his eyes are a little too far apart and his earlobe looks funny.
The entire left arm is off ― not even going to mention dat hand. He's in a sort of 3/4 view pose yet his arm looks flat as it sticks out to the side. It's a bit of a tricky pose and it looks like you're trying to make it easier for yourself. You might want to lower the shoulder a bit as well.
His right arm also looks like it's curving with the body, but that's prolly cuz it's a wip still. ;-;
The body looks okay, but the pelvis might be positioned weirdly depending on what pose he'll take. It'll definitely be a little weird if he's standing. I was having fun rotating him clock-wise a bit before my program exploded to make him look off-centre and moar crazeh.
Ah thanks for critique
-I have so many opinions on this whole drawing I dont know where to start
- But I moved his eye a bit towards the right.. and tried to get his right hand to well..look like a hand abit more. If anything its just the left side thats giving the trouble. But I hope to figure it out soon.
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