chapter 2 (about halfway done) added for review purposes. i'm not sure how i feel about it yet.
P.S. whenever i add an incomplete chapter please tell me how it's going, i really want to know if i'm on the right track or not since i'm always unsure of myself.
EDIT: i cleaned a bit of what i have for chapter 2 up a little. i've still to write the rest of it.
P.S. whenever i add an incomplete chapter please tell me how it's going, i really want to know if i'm on the right track or not since i'm always unsure of myself.
EDIT: i cleaned a bit of what i have for chapter 2 up a little. i've still to write the rest of it.

