2011-09-24, 07:37 AM
KhainiWest Wrote:...
Pretty good, if you added some more swearing it would be perfect!
This didn't make any sense! They were all highly trained, physically fit officers, so how was a single teenager beating the gravy out of them?!
An officer swings his weapon high in an attempt to knock the girl out! But when he makes contact, Miley does not even flinch! It was as if he had just struck a huge rock, "DAMMIT!!" He is shoved aside with a look of surprise plastered on his face! Another officer tries a leg sweep move to try and get Miley off of her feet. "Aaaargh!" The sweep fails horribly as his leg is broken by the impact!
"Officers down! We need backup NOW!" Joe screams into his radio, as Miley turns her gaze to him!