2011-08-25, 11:44 PM
MetaSeraphim Wrote:Kubo is actually really good at planning things out and writing a storyline. Not sure why everyone is always dissing him.
Sometimes he just makes the story lag a lot longer than necessary. He has a talent for this, I;ll give him that, but he should work on his timing a little more. 15+ chapters to do 1 boss fight is a little too long for some people, but rather enjoyable for others. But when the manga gets down to in this chapter, this character received a super power. In this chapter, the hero activates his trump card; in this chapter the trump card is powering up; in this chapter, the trump card is almost full power, but the enemy sees it and starts his counter offensive; in this chapter the enemy almost kills the hero.
versus
power up + counter attack in one chapter; insert savior+ delay tactic; Next chapter SUPA POWER ATTACK!
It doesn't have to be action action action, but it should go a little faster than action... talk... talk... talk... talk...talk...something happens... talk... action!... talk, etc.