oXLAMAXo a sketch

Well, just kinda improving on facial expressions and the form of the face in my wierd style of drawing. it's done in Felt tip pen then smudged with graphite.
Anyway it's a sketch of my main oXLAMAXo sooo yep constructive crit is welcome

Note: this was rejected by basil because it wasn't interesting and non maple related, while they, at the same time accepted a picture of a baby with a laptop. Nice.