Throes' Sketchbook of Doom

The only thing I don't really like is that, to me, the forehead is a bit too big.

Well, here's a pic of my character off the rankings:

She does have a huge forehead, lol. It's actually much smaller in my drawings than it is on my character.

You do know that Maple avatars don't have boobs, right? Totally flat.

And that one you deemed to be "slutty": did that get stretched horizontally when you colored it? It looks right on the notebook there, but to me, it looks too wide in the colored version.

Nobody seems to complain about Mapleboobs when they look at Loose's drawings. And yes, I think some of my lines were off when I brought the second drawing into Photoshop. It's all good though, I'm just looking for practice at this point.