Here Mute, make sure you swallow it all.

^ *applauds* Although if you were about to go to bed you shouldn't posted at all? Or atleast let octo know you'll post something in the morning?

Well, he did say "make sure I swallow it all," so I had made sure he knew my mouth was wide open, waiting to accept.

Interesting analysis. A lot of people are too timid to see things as so specific and just go with it. Nice to see someone who isn't.

I want to see some more art in this section. I'll go evens with you. Even write new stuff if it is needed.

I was told at a young age to "paint a picture with words" when it came to writing. I still carry that lesson and when I read something, I read it once, get a feel for it, then read it over again and set the scene in motion with that.
Though, I've got a back catalog already here.