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Here Mute, make sure you swallow it all.
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octopusprime Wrote:is general.

give me something to work with here. i'm trying to revive a section by sparking a rivalry and you posted a pineappleing lion.

You didn't even tell anyone to get in a car.

I wrote that about 10 minutes before going to bed. =|

My interpretation of it was this:

Autumn brings a change of scene,
Several things but for this the picture I see is a boy going to school and seeing new faces in his class. maybe going to a new school.

I see skeletons where once stood trees
The boy expects to see familiar people, but instead only sees hollow lies, like he was betrayed by something, or someone; or alternatively one of his classmates desks is empty, perhaps he died over the summer?

When i turn to you i see the same old thing.
He's remembering things he enjoyed in his past from that seat, and reliving the moments he's lost forever, trying to get closer to closure.

You're just doing what you always do.
This cemented that him and a friend were supposed to move to a new school but the friend died during the summer for me. The friend was just being himself, doing his normal zany antics, when he died somehow.

What good is change without out motion?
He realizes that he cannot let the past hold him back, and takes a metaphorical step forward.


It's only getting you where it always has,
His friend lived to the fullest, so now he's going to try and live to the fullest as well.

You're never quite the same but you're still right there.

The memories will be carried on by him til he dies.



There. Like I said, kinda sad. Doesn't mean not good, but when I read things like poetry that's not fully present, I make a scene for it. That was the scene I saw, and it was pretty sad. Had a good ending, though.
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Here Mute, make sure you swallow it all. - by Mute - 2011-05-08, 12:22 PM

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