2011-05-08, 04:14 AM
It was actually autumn when it was written. it's just the spark for the inspiration is all. the poem after it was very natural so removing it just didn't seem right. still doesn't in hindsight. I also think it helps the overall vocal tone which is how most of my writing is intended to be read, being verse.
and i expected as much from mute on the feedback, but i'd already made up my mind about trying anyway. i haven't given up either. i've hardly begun, really.
and i expected as much from mute on the feedback, but i'd already made up my mind about trying anyway. i haven't given up either. i've hardly begun, really.