Here Mute, make sure you swallow it all.

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Here Mute, make sure you swallow it all.

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2011-05-08, 04:07 AM

Gwen is the worst person to receive responses from.

My personal opinion: I really like this poem, I feel like its full of meaning. Lots of thought went into it, atleast I'd like to think so. Though your first line feels like it doesn't fit the rest of it at all.

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Here Mute, make sure you swallow it all. - by octopusprime - 2011-05-08, 03:46 AM

Here Mute, make sure you swallow it all. - by Mute - 2011-05-08, 03:51 AM

Here Mute, make sure you swallow it all. - by octopusprime - 2011-05-08, 03:55 AM

Here Mute, make sure you swallow it all. - by Felicitates - 2011-05-08, 04:07 AM

Here Mute, make sure you swallow it all. - by octopusprime - 2011-05-08, 04:14 AM

Here Mute, make sure you swallow it all. - by Felicitates - 2011-05-08, 04:20 AM

Here Mute, make sure you swallow it all. - by octopusprime - 2011-05-08, 04:22 AM

Here Mute, make sure you swallow it all. - by Felicitates - 2011-05-08, 04:29 AM

Here Mute, make sure you swallow it all. - by octopusprime - 2011-05-08, 04:31 AM

Here Mute, make sure you swallow it all. - by Felicitates - 2011-05-08, 04:32 AM

Here Mute, make sure you swallow it all. - by Mute - 2011-05-08, 12:22 PM

Here Mute, make sure you swallow it all. - by Felicitates - 2011-05-08, 12:23 PM

Here Mute, make sure you swallow it all. - by octopusprime - 2011-05-08, 04:20 PM

Here Mute, make sure you swallow it all. - by Mute - 2011-05-08, 04:44 PM

Here Mute, make sure you swallow it all. - by (*-`ω´- )人 - 2011-05-08, 05:19 PM

Here Mute, make sure you swallow it all. - by Sarah - 2011-05-08, 09:46 PM

Here Mute, make sure you swallow it all. - by octopusprime - 2011-05-09, 03:26 AM

Here Mute, make sure you swallow it all. - by Mute - 2011-05-09, 03:29 AM

Here Mute, make sure you swallow it all. - by Felicitates - 2011-05-09, 04:15 AM

Here Mute, make sure you swallow it all. - by octopusprime - 2011-05-09, 02:03 PM

Here Mute, make sure you swallow it all. - by Mute - 2011-05-09, 02:15 PM

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