i would suggest elaborating on the 'whys'. ex: you max heal first because___, you do mp eater next because ____. because right now, youre just telling people to "do it this way". thats what guides do but good guides would add in "because". 
also, i strongly discouraging presenting the ditching teleport in the 2nd job guide. maxed teleport not only saved mp, but is noticeably increased in teleport distance well. a high level of teleport is needed for certain specific pqs (not sure which since i dont pq) and also needed for gpq.
also for a solo cleric, it is still more prefered that you drop either mp eater or holy arrow since holy arrow will be replaced by angel ray in 4th and maxed teleport will save you more money than mp eater can.
if you want to present people with "more than one way to build a cleric" then you can do either dropping HA and not dropping HA (but drop eater instead).
also, i strongly discouraging presenting the ditching teleport in the 2nd job guide. maxed teleport not only saved mp, but is noticeably increased in teleport distance well. a high level of teleport is needed for certain specific pqs (not sure which since i dont pq) and also needed for gpq.
also for a solo cleric, it is still more prefered that you drop either mp eater or holy arrow since holy arrow will be replaced by angel ray in 4th and maxed teleport will save you more money than mp eater can.
if you want to present people with "more than one way to build a cleric" then you can do either dropping HA and not dropping HA (but drop eater instead).