2008-09-29, 07:26 PM
Acim Wrote:A dexless sin is still a sin. If it was only about being dexless, this guide would consist of an equips guide, and a short, simple AP allocation section. Maybe some calculations, and maybe a training places guide.
you shouldve titled your guide "guide for the sin" and then talk about "dexless sin" as a subsection because "dexless sin" is a branch of "sin", not the other way around. its not easy to make a guide about dexless sins. you can probably say all you need to say in about 2 paragraphs. ive gave thought to this before i wrote my dex guide which is why i decided to expand it to low/no dex, how to scroll for needed equipment, and how to raise money to be no/low dex.
the important things to note are relevancy, cohesion, and accuracy in both title, topic, and subject. good writing is treated as a work of art, like a song or a painting. including things that arent relevant to a work of writing is like adding a note that throws a song out of beat, or a smudge that ruins a painting.

