2011-03-16, 09:18 PM
Smooth Criminal Wrote:Looked over it briefly anything that I could really criticize.Yeah, I'll make the bow thinner. Also, I always thought that bow had no string on it and that she created the string from thin air when she gets ready to shoot.
I remember her bow being somewhat more slender and the arc of the bow seems a bit big. Even from the perspective we're looking at the bow from, the arc seems big and the bow itself seems a bit fat. The problem might be that the bow just appears too short.
Also, where'd the bow string go? Couldn't get detailed enough to draw that it?

