WIP - Torahime

Is she adjusting her hat with her left hand? The hat itself seems to be floating in the air behind her head, not on it.

Hand is not touching the hat, she just has it near her head. I think lowering the edge of the hat might help that. Also the top too.

The bow looks a tiny bit different in your sketch, but outside of that I really REALLY like your sketch and cant wait to see your final drawing! ^^

Okay, I'll enlarge the bow a bit.

The arm holding the bow looks too relaxed to me, if you were going for something dynamic.
Sticky Nipple Syndrome.
What's causing her hair to be poofed outwards like it is?

She's in a relaxed pose, that's why. As for the sticky nipple, I think tightening the suit might help that, otherwise I don't know how to fix it. Any ideas?

I think poofing the hair less might look better. Thanks!

Yeah, the hat looks awkward. Also the way her arm is hiding behind her bow makes the sleeve look... wonky. Other than that it looks good to me.

I don't understand the sleeve part. : \

Oh, the shading was a little off, that's why the hat looked weird.

The shading is just to show that it's the behind part of the hat. : P