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WIP - Torahime
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Looked over it briefly anything that I could really criticize.

I remember her bow being somewhat more slender and the arc of the bow seems a bit big. Even from the perspective we're looking at the bow from, the arc seems big and the bow itself seems a bit fat. The problem might be that the bow just appears too short.

Also, where'd the bow string go? Couldn't get detailed enough to draw that it?
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WIP - Torahime - by Loose - 2011-03-16, 08:46 PM
WIP - Torahime - by Cyadd - 2011-03-16, 08:59 PM
WIP - Torahime - by Zelkova - 2011-03-16, 08:59 PM
WIP - Torahime - by Mute - 2011-03-16, 09:01 PM
WIP - Torahime - by Jon - 2011-03-16, 09:02 PM
WIP - Torahime - by Cyadd - 2011-03-16, 09:04 PM
WIP - Torahime - by Smooth Criminal - 2011-03-16, 09:09 PM
WIP - Torahime - by Loose - 2011-03-16, 09:14 PM
WIP - Torahime - by aslemn - 2011-03-16, 09:16 PM
WIP - Torahime - by Loose - 2011-03-16, 09:18 PM
WIP - Torahime - by Smooth Criminal - 2011-03-17, 04:44 PM
WIP - Torahime - by Cyadd - 2011-03-17, 04:58 PM
WIP - Torahime - by Loose - 2011-05-02, 07:28 PM
WIP - Torahime - by aslemn - 2011-05-02, 07:38 PM
WIP - Torahime - by Loose - 2011-05-02, 07:43 PM
WIP - Torahime - by aslemn - 2011-05-02, 08:04 PM
WIP - Torahime - by MariettaRC - 2011-05-02, 08:28 PM
WIP - Torahime - by Loose - 2011-05-02, 09:09 PM
WIP - Torahime - by Erich - 2011-05-02, 09:26 PM
WIP - Torahime - by Zelkova - 2011-05-02, 09:38 PM
WIP - Torahime - by Derosis - 2011-05-02, 09:53 PM
WIP - Torahime - by MariettaRC - 2011-05-02, 10:08 PM

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