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[Draft] Guide for Basic and Advanced Carnival Pqing
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JoeTang Wrote:Crossbowmen in CPQ should not be slower than Hunters unless they pineappleed up their skill build.

Aren't crossbows slower than bows, though...?

I didn't read the whole thing, mostly skimming through it, but I've noticed a couple of things.

-Grammar and spelling. You could brush up a little bit on this. Plus I sometimes saw a period dangling after a spoiler and other formatting issues.
-Color your text? It looks really plain right now Cool.

For a first impression, that's pretty good! You could also attempt to add some humor, I believe mine and Acim's are the only ones that have humor.
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[Draft] Guide for Basic and Advanced Carnival Pqing - by Corn - 2008-09-25, 03:55 PM

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