2008-09-19, 01:37 PM
Thanks so much, guys! I tried to fix it a bit and I'll say that it looks better but still not the best. XD But I'll definately take your advice in future drawings. 
In fact, I drew a few more after that and I think I've improved since. >_>
Anyway, here's what I finished with. Yes, I was too lazy to color. D':
http://mariettarc.deviantart.com/art/Map...s-98336057
In fact, I drew a few more after that and I think I've improved since. >_>Anyway, here's what I finished with. Yes, I was too lazy to color. D':
http://mariettarc.deviantart.com/art/Map...s-98336057