2008-09-19, 02:26 AM
Hmm...
I'd say tweak the ears, move them down a bit...and maybe lower the eyebrows.
Her shoulders are also pretty broad with respect to the rest of the picture. I mean, they are fine compared to her head--but her body is really tiny. So beef her torso up a bit, maybe? Also, give her a little more wrist definition.
I like it a lot, I think you have some room for improvement but you're working in the right direction. I'd say yeah, human anatomy is fairly important (like Throws is saying), but I was never able to focus purely on learning real-life style (which is maybe why I still suck to this day...?) so I just drew what I thought was fun. Practice makes perfect, no matter what style you draw, and I found it funner to just practice what I liked.
I'd say tweak the ears, move them down a bit...and maybe lower the eyebrows.
Her shoulders are also pretty broad with respect to the rest of the picture. I mean, they are fine compared to her head--but her body is really tiny. So beef her torso up a bit, maybe? Also, give her a little more wrist definition.
I like it a lot, I think you have some room for improvement but you're working in the right direction. I'd say yeah, human anatomy is fairly important (like Throws is saying), but I was never able to focus purely on learning real-life style (which is maybe why I still suck to this day...?) so I just drew what I thought was fun. Practice makes perfect, no matter what style you draw, and I found it funner to just practice what I liked.