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As Misery Call, Thus Answer (Regretfully So)
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I like the imagery and can see the events vividly in my head. The coworker paragraph gives a bit more background to his misery but it feels out of place to me.

Ch 2: Loving the setting.

Ch 3: I'm surprised he actually planned a date.
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As Misery Call, Thus Answer (Regretfully So) - by Salguod - 2010-09-05, 12:13 PM

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