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☆The Ayako Chronicles - Part 1☆
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Will Wrote:It's difficult to really tell whats going on.
Girl has a crush on john Barricade? and he goes to her school?..
Confusing, but if this is like your first major story, it's not too bad.
I'll wait to see if this moves forward before really judging it.

if it is to it'll be somewhere other than SP.
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☆The Ayako Chronicles - Part 1☆ - by xAyakoCx - 2010-05-31, 08:48 PM
☆The Ayako Chronicles - Part 1☆ - by Will - 2010-05-31, 09:19 PM
☆The Ayako Chronicles - Part 1☆ - by TøbiasBlack - 2010-05-31, 10:25 PM
☆The Ayako Chronicles - Part 1☆ - by Will - 2010-06-01, 12:03 AM
☆The Ayako Chronicles - Part 1☆ - by xAyakoCx - 2010-06-01, 04:35 AM
☆The Ayako Chronicles - Part 1☆ - by Will - 2010-06-07, 12:52 AM

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