2010-05-01, 07:13 PM
i really enjoyed that piece. personally would've loved to hear it loop instead of have that 2~3 second abrupt stop, but thats just me. at ~:40, when the plucking/piano instrument was added in, i got a feeling that there was a carriage being drawn into a city-scene, with the horses trotting along as people walked by buying and selling things at stalls all throughout, with the people inside looking out and seeing the people outside. would love to see it expanded upon, and maybe a bit added to it; it feels fine as it is now, but personally i get that it wasn't finished yet, so the abrupt stop is something like you hit a creative wall?

