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This is so sad.
LDIntensity
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2010-04-30, 06:21 AM
So similar to a cheezy email a ex girlfriend sent me...
It could be sad but the cheezyness makes it akward instead of sad.
Without repeating the same line over and over, and maybe saying it just at the beggining and at the end it could be much much better.
But that's just my humble opinion.
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This is so sad. - by saywutnow - 2010-04-30, 06:10 AM
This is so sad. - by LDIntensity - 2010-04-30, 06:21 AM
This is so sad. - by Eos - 2010-04-30, 07:31 AM
This is so sad. - by LDIntensity - 2010-04-30, 08:20 AM
This is so sad. - by Eos - 2010-04-30, 08:28 AM
This is so sad. - by Erebus - 2010-04-30, 08:34 AM
This is so sad. - by LDIntensity - 2010-04-30, 08:35 AM
This is so sad. - by xLeviathan - 2010-04-30, 12:45 PM

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