2010-04-17, 03:52 PM
[color="#000080"] Pretty good for a start. Indeed. I've used FL since version 3.5, so you can say I'm pretty damned experienced with it.
First of all, the EQ. The peaks after the first resolution is too high. You should limit the threshold to -3 ~ -2 dBs. You could try lowering the bass in the 60~160 hz part to make the sound a little smoother. Also, the piano's bass and the bass itself gets too jammed in the chords sequence part. That's a first insight.
Also, I liked the synth riff in the last part a lot. It gave a chasey feeling to it that I found very nice.
Well, in a more professional way, you should also get better drum patterns, better drum samples, and trigger all of them from the FPC generator.
Oh, and last and not least, tweak the velocity peaks in the piano roll for all the instruments a lil bit more, you'll take away that plain sound you got.
Hope it helps, and come back to me if you need any help! [/color]
First of all, the EQ. The peaks after the first resolution is too high. You should limit the threshold to -3 ~ -2 dBs. You could try lowering the bass in the 60~160 hz part to make the sound a little smoother. Also, the piano's bass and the bass itself gets too jammed in the chords sequence part. That's a first insight.
Also, I liked the synth riff in the last part a lot. It gave a chasey feeling to it that I found very nice.
Well, in a more professional way, you should also get better drum patterns, better drum samples, and trigger all of them from the FPC generator.
Oh, and last and not least, tweak the velocity peaks in the piano roll for all the instruments a lil bit more, you'll take away that plain sound you got.
Hope it helps, and come back to me if you need any help! [/color]