My newest composition: Words I've Never Said

I imagined a young boy and girl destined to be lovers from first meeting, however, the young boy misses his chance. As he grows older, she parts from him because of his lack of action, then they are reunited. He reveals his loves for her and she does the same. She then is diagnosed with a terminal illness, and he is forced to stand by and watch her die, resenting those years they were apart.

Only criticism is your personal way of playing the piano. It seems very awkward and forced to me. You are either truly into the music, or are over-acting the emotion, which makes it hard to watch. Try to sit straight up and play it with sternness, showing occasional emotion at intricate melodies to truly relate your relationship between the song and yourself, as opposed to you currently making out with it all over the piano.