2009-12-08, 03:37 AM
Just a little help, I'm no great artist myself but I think this will help you.
I think you need more contrast in your figures. You have really good definition of contrast in the brick road in that 1 acrylic one. But the grass sorta sinks and has no real definition. It's easy to guess that it is grass, but you aren't telling us that it is grass.
Same thing in your Surrealism one, wonderful background and transition. It's just your figure seems flat and irregular. Also, maybe popping the mirror would make it seem she is going through it more realistically though you can't really go though a mirror like that.
Otherwise, your digital work is amazing.
Keep on going! Good luck with watercolors, they make me so mad some times but I find if you set a base and then outline with sharpie/permanent markers it looks really nice.
I think you need more contrast in your figures. You have really good definition of contrast in the brick road in that 1 acrylic one. But the grass sorta sinks and has no real definition. It's easy to guess that it is grass, but you aren't telling us that it is grass.
Same thing in your Surrealism one, wonderful background and transition. It's just your figure seems flat and irregular. Also, maybe popping the mirror would make it seem she is going through it more realistically though you can't really go though a mirror like that.
Otherwise, your digital work is amazing.
Keep on going! Good luck with watercolors, they make me so mad some times but I find if you set a base and then outline with sharpie/permanent markers it looks really nice.