2009-11-13, 06:17 PM
Im terms of control, you showed pretty nice control throughout the video. If that's what you were aiming at, you did an awesome job.
If you were aiming at an artistic work, you did a pretty decent job as well. The speed of the footage went well with the pace of the song, and you even used flashback during the intro.
I'm not sure what you're trying to do with this video, but I'll leave some constructive criticism in terms of artistic value (Im a bowmaster, I wont be able to comment too much about viper control xD).
Flashback: It would've been better if you had different footage. You had the right idea in terms of timing, but if you had say, 75, then 85, then 95, etc. in shorter time increments, it would've been awesome.
musical interlude: Just a suggestion, but in terms of footage, I'd say to segment off there; for example, start off the himes footage when the middle instrumental section comes in, and when it leads into the electric guitar solo, have the "highest", most exciting footage there.
I'm also kinda curious as to your reasoning to putting the lyrics at the bottom of the video. I cant read Japanese, so I can only read the English lyrics, but do the lyrics contribute to the footage you're showing in your video? Just curious. It's an amazing sounding song though, I think I'll go off and find an album of theirs and listen through it or something, haha.
And on a final note, gratz on 160 xD
If you were aiming at an artistic work, you did a pretty decent job as well. The speed of the footage went well with the pace of the song, and you even used flashback during the intro.
I'm not sure what you're trying to do with this video, but I'll leave some constructive criticism in terms of artistic value (Im a bowmaster, I wont be able to comment too much about viper control xD).
Flashback: It would've been better if you had different footage. You had the right idea in terms of timing, but if you had say, 75, then 85, then 95, etc. in shorter time increments, it would've been awesome.
musical interlude: Just a suggestion, but in terms of footage, I'd say to segment off there; for example, start off the himes footage when the middle instrumental section comes in, and when it leads into the electric guitar solo, have the "highest", most exciting footage there.
I'm also kinda curious as to your reasoning to putting the lyrics at the bottom of the video. I cant read Japanese, so I can only read the English lyrics, but do the lyrics contribute to the footage you're showing in your video? Just curious. It's an amazing sounding song though, I think I'll go off and find an album of theirs and listen through it or something, haha.
And on a final note, gratz on 160 xD